Greccy anarchiści potrzebują pomocy!

Nie mam żadnego stopnia naukowego z języka angielskiego, ale tekst do ministerstwa trzeba poprawić. Moja propozycja nie jest pewnie wolna od błędów, więc niech lepiej wyedukowani zgłaszają swoje poprawki:

Half a year passed since the May protests during the European Social Forum in Athens. Through all this time Tarasios Zantorozniy and Gerasimos Iriakopoulos are kept in prison, charged with participation in a riot. For a few weeks they carry on a hunger strike, demanding their release. Their condition is dramatical- prolonging of the hunger strike can lead them to death. In this situation we demand the Greek authorities to release both of them immediately. Should no reaction take place, which will inevitably lead to death of the hunger strikers, all the responsibility for this will fall on the Greek government and other organs of power.

List po polsu jest nieprawidlowy!!!! Dobra wersja jest na forum anarchistyczny mw dziale ACK!!!! www.a.f.glt.pl proszwe adminow o pprawke!!

Adres minjust@otenet.gr od dawna nie działa. Już dawno temu wysłałem tam list i dostałem komunikat, że taki adres nie istnieje. Widocznie szybko zapchała im się skrzynka.

Mi też nie działa... udało sie wysłać tylko do ambasady w Polsce.

Najwidoczniej zablokowali konto na chwilowy czas, aby ostudzic temperament.

Elo! czemu wciąż na CIA podawana jest nieprawidlowa wersja listu po polsku???????

Jezeli chodzi o wersje angielską, to poprawiłabym też początek - jak coś się dzieje od jakiegoś czasu to powinno byc raczej w Present Perfect, czyli:

cały tekst:
Half a year has passed since the May protests during the European Social Forum in Athens. For all this time Tarasios Zantorozniy and Gerasimos Iriakopoulos have been kept in prison, charged with participation in a riot. For a few weeks they have carried on a hunger strike, demanding their release. Their condition is dramatical- prolonging of the hunger strike can lead them to death. In this situation we demand the Greek authorities to release both of them immediately. Should no reaction take place, which will inevitably lead to death of the hunger strikers, all the responsibility for this will fall on the Greek government and other organs of power.

ale po co?
Lepiej:

Half a year has passed since the May protests during the European Social Forum in Athens. For all this time Tarasios Zantorozniy and Gerasimos Iriakopoulos have been kept in prison, charged with participation in a riot. For a few weeks they have carried on a hunger strike, demanding their release. Their condition is serious- prolonging the hunger strike can be fatal. In this situation we demand the Greek authorities release both of them immediately. Should no action take place, inevitably leading to death of the hunger strikers, all responsibility will fall on the Greek government and other authorities.